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Sisters of Battle

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Relina and Selina Rampart in GDI form

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Relina and Selina Rampart © TrueRageXRT

For those who debate the fantasy armor thing: in this form it is merely a mental apparition, their whole body enters a state of absolute matter. No longer of real flesh anything that can harm their skin would shred their armor, and anything that cannot damage their armor has no hope against their skin. Each GDI takes an appearance that represents the alignment of their power and their personality.

The story for this is actually fully cut from my book, it is many pages so not to scare people I will upload it in pieces which I will put icons for in this description. I would appreciate it a ton if you read at least some.


Part 1
Sisters of Battle Part 1The sisters stared in awe at the sheer brilliance of the energy that poured out.  The chaotic purple bursts spread throughout the sky, streaking bolts racing in all directions.  Never before witnessing such raw power it washed over them overwhelming their senses.  The reaction had reached its apex, letting loose a final shockwave that caused the earth to rumble and the sister's knees to buckle.  As the both dropped to a kneeling position the composition of the emissions began to change.  From the purple shaped waves of flowing blue energy, flashing red power and systematic black forces.

As the last of purple faded away the three colors focal

Part 2
Sisters of Battle Part 2"She must find her own way now, I am confident she will feel the truth in her heart and your bond will return.  However right now there is something that must be dealt with before it can progress too far.  How much have you learned and are able to control of your abilities?"

Selina reacted as though someone just woke her as she answered the question, "Well, we are much stronger than normal people.  Though nothing like you, but we were able to do things similar once when we first got our powers."

After hearing her explain further, Atilla nodded in understanding, "I see, so that's how it is. The two of you have tremendous power, and with prac

Part 3
Sisters of Battle Part 3Relina recovered from the blast, getting to her feet she picked the tiny shards from her flesh.  Standing where the crystal had once been was something terrible.  It had the silhouette of a man, but it could not be called human.  There it stood, body covered with a gnarly black trench coat, the theme continued with layers of red and black straps covering it's chest, black pants, and gothic heavy boots.  His red hair sliced at the air like spinning buzz saw blades.  His face and hands covered in glowing angular red lines.  It was facing upwards; Relina saw his eyes open slowly, a grin on his face.  She saw the angry eyes, black around a red ir
Part 4
Sisters of Battle Part 4After going through the doorway another wave of robotic contraptions and weapons awaited for them.  As before their abilities let Atilla and Selina litter the floor with mechanical bits before the next blast door gave way to the next distraction.  The pattern continued with each one more difficult than the last, however Selina was able to improve herself as well.  Not just physically faster and stronger she could project her energy from her fists as balls of blue plasma that blasted away anything it hit.

"How many more rooms can he have?"  Selina asked.

"Infinite if he wished.  This place has been working for thousands of years.  These thin

Part 5
Sisters of Battle Part 5In the seconds Relina used to investigate her body Rage had stood back up, wasting no time he charged her.  She could see him moving to slice her with the large blade in his left hand, and on reflex she brought up her right hand.  ‘It will cut right through me!’ she thought doubting this new protection would help.  She didn’t stop herself, watching her own hand close like it was gripping an object.  She thought about how handy a weapon or anything at all would be right now, and to her amazement a handle began to materialize in her hand.  Growing past the grip Relina could tell it was held like a tonfa, but as it grew in size
Part 6

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Ok, so I just finished reading all five chapters. What an awesome story! I think it's really amazing how different Selina and Relina are, as well as their fathers. The main thing I liked about the story was them getting to know more about their fathers and getting in tune with their powers. I can't wait to draw them even more now! :)

I know I'm drawing them both 'powered up' which I think I can handle going by the story details and this ref, I'll go ahead and start on them and you can give me your thoughts when I show you the WIPs :)