First off, that old parchment as a backdrop for the text is perfect, that is a great idea to make it readable and fit the story. Another good bacjground with the character added in looking pretty natural. Your skill seems to have gotten better than the older front cover you did before. I almost didn't notice the skull, the darkened edge effect blends it in very nicely. The story seems very intriguing, with the custodians it adds something difffernet to make it mroe than a plain pirate story. I do notice some grammar issues, like it should have 'an Earth Custodian' instead of just 'a'. Also this sentence seems awkward when reading it, I don't get good flow in the word choices. 'If this fails, she get threatened with death by people in the town where she often was as child and spend her life before piracy.'